Monday, August 27, 2012

Shadorma 2 -- Dandelion Field

 



my child blows
dandelion seeds
sending white
down skyward
that had been a field of gold:
"Are we making clouds? '
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12 comments:

  1. MaryAugust 27, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    What a beautifully gentle poem! The words of a child are amazing sometime, aren't they?

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  2. MargaretAugust 27, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    :) Children say the most joyous things.

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  3. GraceAugust 27, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    This is lovely...I like the last line about clouds ~

    My shadorma poems are here:

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/08/shadorma-poems.html

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  4. SusanAugust 27, 2012 at 7:44 PM

    mmm Dandelion cloud in golden sky

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 27, 2012 at 7:45 PM

    Oh so wonderful - children live so close to magic!! I love it!

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  6. PattiKenAugust 27, 2012 at 8:14 PM

    Exactly what Sherry said. Nothing beats the magic of childhood.

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  7. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 28, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    I never tire of a bit of dandelion magic. And the last line is perfect.

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  8. Lillian Susan ThomasAugust 28, 2012 at 11:28 AM

    How do you turn off the word verification? I didn't know it was on! Help, anyone?

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  9. Lillian Susan ThomasAugust 28, 2012 at 11:29 AM

    It didn't do it when I put a comment.

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  10. DulcinaAugust 29, 2012 at 5:50 AM

    Making clouds, God bless innocence!
    Lovely shadorma beautifully written.
    :)

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  11. Amrit SinhaAugust 29, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    Beautifully written ... Loved the innocence !!!

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