Sunday, January 23, 2011

Puente 1: snow erases

all scents
from icy air
but for pine and smoke

~snow erases~

all hues
from a landscape
but one cardinal...

written and published on poetfreak September 2009
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4 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 23, 2011 at 12:10 PM

    This is strikingly beautiful. I can see the cardinal:)

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorJanuary 23, 2011 at 1:09 PM

    Such fabulous visualization. You know how to choose your words Lillian. I love this bridge form poem.

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 24, 2011 at 12:10 PM

    empowering writing..
    love the imagery your words paint.
    keep it up.
    :)

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  4. The UnknowngnomeJanuary 25, 2011 at 12:35 AM

    Marvelously clear and fresh.

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