Friday, January 28, 2011

Sedoka 1-- tattoo of rain

Cold tattoo of rain
hits the north-facing window:
the rat-ta-tat of drum sticks.
the sounds of snowflakes
softly on the panes of glass
Swish like brushes on the snares.

Written and published January 2011
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3 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorJanuary 28, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    Beautiful musical metaphor to bring the scene to imaginative life.

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 28, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    So well done - I can hear the different sounds through your words.

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  3. Celestial DreamzJanuary 29, 2011 at 7:08 AM

    such musical metaphors ... I cam listen to the sound of your poem.

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