Thursday, October 13, 2011

death caps and milk caps


in
woods toadstools
over unmarked graves
push through decay: white shiny
skulls

through
humus from last year's garden
the mushrooms emerge:
baby's head
crowns
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  1. JinksyOctober 14, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    Delightful response for this oddball form. ♥

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorOctober 14, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    Hi Lillian, I'm so glad you tried out this form. Your choice of subject seemed to fit the structure very well, and your choice of single syllable words at start and end, carrying all the weight.

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